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Feb 08, 2019 12:46:01


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Everyone in my family is afraid of heights. But we randomly decided to go on one roller-coaster ride.

I was feeling brave. I started motivating my younger brother well in advance. 

I will be right here next to you. 
You got this. 

We got strapped and the ride started. 

I was still at it.... motivating...

I am right here. 
Don't be afraid.

The ride started building momentum. Suddenly it occurred to me that I may plummet to my death.

Too Fast.. This is too fast.
I could have been warm and safe at home. 

I tried to close my eyes and breath.... but when we got to the highest point - I lost it. 

I can't do this. 
Get me off. 

My brother was shocked. He turned to look at me.  

Though he was equally terrified, he burst out laughing when he saw me oscillate between crying and laughing at myself. The Tony Robbins from seconds ago was gone.

Note to self - never volunteer to be a coach.

My brother was still laughing when we got off the ride.
He looked at me in the eye and asked... WHY?

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    @keni OMG this is hilarious too! I just discovered you by peeking at the hiking/adventure piece. I've got to read all you writing!

    Julie Browne avatar Julie Browne | Feb 11, 2019 17:41:38
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      @juliebrowne - Thank you again Julie.

      Keni avatar Keni | Feb 11, 2019 19:17:59
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    Haha this was very enjoyable to read. How old is your borther?

    Abe avatar Abe | Feb 09, 2019 22:54:55
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      @abrahamKim - Oh we were all in our late 20's when this happened. We were all adults... just very scared of heights... And my brother reminded me after reading this post that I forgot to mention an important detail - We picked the most benign and least scary ride in the whole park when this happened. :)

      Keni avatar Keni | Feb 09, 2019 22:26:18
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    @keni ?? this is very accurate! I Know because I was there! Very well written Keny!

    Hawi D avatar Hawi D | Feb 08, 2019 20:18:25
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      @hawid ?

      Keni avatar Keni | Feb 08, 2019 16:30:27
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    @keni you're a good writer ma.

    Seun Oyebode avatar Seun Oyebode | Feb 08, 2019 18:48:34
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      @seunoyebode - Thank you 'Seun. You are kind.

      Keni avatar Keni | Feb 08, 2019 16:26:54
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